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Describe your profile picture. What color hair do you have? Is your hair long or short? What color eyes do you have? Do you have any facial hair?

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Becky
Mes cheveux est noir et un petit pus blonde. Je porte les cheveux longs. Mes yeux sont bleu. Je suis une fille; je ne porte pas une barbe ou une moustache...
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Submitted: 2007-09-04 05:46:21



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  • 2007-09-05 02:06:29
    Erik.
    Great start Becky! This is really good. Cultural note: French is a gendered language, and so any adjective we use will always make an agreement in gender and number with the noun it goes with. So for instance, hair ("cheveux") and eyes ("yeux") will always need masculine plural endings. That said, you would want to add "s" to "noir," "blond," and "bleu." Grammar: Your grammar is really quite good here! The syntax is perfect! You also conjugate the verb "être" very well! Make sure though, to agree your verbs with the subject every time, making the first "est" = "sont." To go even further in your progress, you would change your indefinite articles ("un / une / des") to "de" following the negation, "pas." Great start! I'm really impressed! Keep up the writing exercises and I am available for questions if you have any! e.
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