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Describing Objects
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
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凝香秋水

凝香秋水
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2008-11-19 13:22:07Rafael Bandeira
The food is on the table. The boy is in the box. -
2008-11-19 13:47:18nellisAverage rating:
The food (IS) on the table , and the boy ( IS) in the box. You are good but please you write more than this. -
2008-11-19 14:05:26Skyflakes
we don't put a boy in a box hehehe -
2008-11-19 14:14:49lyrchAverage rating:
1. You need to put 'the' before all of the nouns in this sentence because you are not directly addressing any of them. 2. There are no verbs used in this sentence. In this sentence you need the proper forms of "to be", which would be 'is" in this case. 3. 'the food is on the table' is one sentence, and 'the boy is in the box' is another sentence. you need to use the conjunction "and" to join them if you want to use a "," or you can us a "." instead. -
2008-11-19 14:21:20pete4pne
The food is on the table. The boy is in the box... is better but you need to contribute more than this. -
2008-11-19 14:27:11Blair
This is a good beginning. Your sentences can have a verb to make them better. Food IS on the table. The boy IS in the box. -
2008-11-19 14:37:18Siamak
Maybe this sentences used for title!
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