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Going on Vacation

Describe a vacation you are taking? When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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wenbto
when I trip to beijing,while I am 14. I was went to Sunmer Place,,etc
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Submitted: 2008-11-19 12:59:19



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  • 2008-11-19 13:54:45
    Paul
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    I will travel to Beijing when I am 14. I went to Sunmer Place.
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  • 2008-11-19 14:15:31
    Tommi
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    I think Tony meant: When I travelled to Beijing, I was 14. I went to Sunmer Place, etc.
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  • 2008-11-19 14:20:01
    Tommi
    Or under this excercise: "When I will travel to Beijing, I will be 14. I will go to Sunmer Place, etc. "
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  • 2008-11-19 14:29:50
    Blair
    Good, but let me help. When I WENT ON A trip to Beijing, WHEN I WAS 14, I WENT to Sunmer Place.
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