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Describing People

Using two attributes each, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and tall.

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stasya
I am a woman. The boy is short. The girl is young. The man is rich. The woman is tall. You are poor.
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Submitted: 2008-11-19 12:59:29



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  • 2008-11-19 13:20:54
    hanke（阿洪）
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  • 2008-11-19 13:26:09
    Ridan
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    The words and the punctuation is right...but but you didn't read the question carefuly The question tells you to describe ( two attributes ) and attributes means ( adjectives) so Ex: The boy is short and young. The man is tall and fat. and the rest like this describe the six people
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  • 2008-11-19 14:34:21
    Blair
    Good sentences. May I correct? I am a woman and young. The boy is short and fat. The girl is young and thin. The man is rich and tall. The woman is tall and thin. You are poor and happy.
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  • 2008-11-19 14:37:50
    hanke（阿洪）
    Very good! Please continue.
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  • 2008-11-19 14:46:32
    hanke（阿洪）
    Please continue.
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