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Describing Objects

Describe (with positive and negative attributes) the objects you learned about in this lesson. Ex. These flowers are not red. They are blue.

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huevo
THE COINS ARE NOT SILVERS. THEY ARE GOLD THE BUILDINGS ARE NOT WHITE. THEY ARE BROWN THE CARS ARE NOT YELOW. THEY ARE SILVERS THE WALLETS ARE NOT BLACK. THEY ARE BROWN THE PURSES ARE NOT SILVERS. THEY ARE WHITE THE TREES ARE NOT WHITE. THEY ARE GREEN THE HOUSES ARE NOT PURPLE. THEY VARE WHITE
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Submitted: 2008-11-19 12:59:30



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  • 2008-11-19 14:06:03
    Lasertoast
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    In this sentence, "Silver" is an adjective, and adjectives are NEVER plural. Also, the placement of your periods is incorrect. Should be: THE COINS ARE NOT SILVER; THEY ARE GOLD. THE BUILDINGS ARE NOT WHITE; THEY ARE BROWN. THE CARS ARE NOT YELOW; THEY ARE SILVER. THE WALLETS ARE NOT BLACK; THEY ARE BROWN. THE PURSES ARE NOT SILVER; THEY ARE WHITE. THE TREES ARE NOT WHITE; THEY ARE GREEN. THE HOUSES ARE NOT PURPLE; THEY ARE WHITE .
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